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I see what you mean. Well in this part I was trying to discribe the love she had for Jack and how because of what happened the consequences that made ...

I'm glad there was more. I liked this too. It's short but worth reading. I envy you cause i can't write things in present tense along with a lot of ...

Chapter Two: My lavender dress swished as I danced on the ballroom floor of the Leroux Manor. I had been dancing with Jonathon for the past three songs. Even, though, ...

Yeah it did help alot. With what you put on here there is some things i'll have to correct you on: When you said that unmarried men would be called ...

I loved it! Honestly i really did. I'm not very good at critting poetry but I'll try my best. My favorite part was: your name is always in my mind, ...

I like it. Um I'm not too good at critting poetry either crysi so don't feel bad...I'm going to do the best i can. This part right here didn't seem ...

I liked it. Um on the critting, the only problems i found with it were the same ones that Misty Lynn found. I can't wait to read more to find ...

I loved it!!! :D I enjoyed reading it as much as I did the other one. I hope there will be more to read after this one. Good job and ...

Chapter One: The carriage pulled to a stop, and I, Mary Jane Pendleton, miserably stepped down to the ground. My parents, Elizabeth and Jacob Pendleton followed my lead. “Do you ...

Chapter Two: Dressed in my pink dress and pink flip-flops, I walked down the stairs to the kitchen. “Morning, honey,” Mom chirped. “You seem happy this morning. What happened last ...

Well, cute is what I'm going for. Skye is the drummer and Blane is the jock. I decided to make all her friends already at the mall and she had ...

I'd pick luke since he when he tells it it explains more. Hope I helped.

This is something that I have been working on lately. It's not my best work but I hope you like it anyway. Chapter One: Who ever thought that childhood enemies ...

I liked it. I can relate to the character Jen on how the voices in her head argue with whether she should or shouldn't hang out with them. I look ...

I write because I enjoy doing it and cuz I have like all these ideas in my head and have to get them out. I guess you could say I ...